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Meet me behind the bathrooms
Disheveled by footsteps and
Clogged by girls in tears
locked in stall boxes.

I touch your face
Lost in a moments caress
But I touch tongues
In dim rooms with
Plastered fantasies of
This mysterious, "more"
All in attempts to make you
Jealous.

But you never care enough
To wail my name in disdain.
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And all I want you to scream is,
"I want you in my life."
Because needs can be fulfilled,
but wants are less likely to waiver.
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This poem expresses desperation very well. The slightly sleezy beginning and the more earnest ending make a connection between a promiscuous act and the true feeling behind it. I really liked this one a lot!
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~Life-Is-Oppurtunity May 14, 2012  Student Writer
Well thank you, I hadn't noticed the sleaziness of it before.
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Glad to point that out then, lol
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